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sway and shiver
shiver and sway
the crispness of a single thought
fading; the ghost of the fallen,
brittled-boned and dragonfruit-fleshed;
a memory, whisp of a burnt-out desire
sway and shiver
shiver and sway
- i am but a gust of wind teasing a flame



-SophieCT, Feb 6 2013
Day .037.
:iconwordeea:
Day .037.

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:bulletblue: Je participe au challenge "un poème par jour" du groupe
:bulletgreen: I am participating in the "one poem per day" challenge of the #Glory-Be-Project

All comments welcome / Tous les commentaires sont les bienvenus !
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:iconarchelyxs:
This is really precise and wonderful. I have lots of love for the last line. :coffeecup:
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=Wordeea Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you !
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=Ninefiftin Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Il est particulier celui-là. Dense, avec de belles images, de belles sonorités... j'aime bien l'allitération en "s"... "dragonfruit-fleshed" est super original je trouve... bref plein de qualités pour ce poème, je le trouve un peu différent de ce que tu fais d'habitude ^^
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=Wordeea Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Merci - oui j'essaie de nouvelles chaussures, pour ainsi dire :)

Merci pour tous les faves aussi :hug:
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=Ninefiftin Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, bien dit ^^

De rien, c'est mérité - désolée si ça ressemble à du spam, mais j'avais tellement de retard XD
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=Wordeea Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
T'inquiètes je vais devoir faire de même aussi ;)
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=Ninefiftin Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Héhé ^^
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:icondelice1941:
Good ending to this poem, last line has impact:rose:
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=Wordeea Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ! :rose:
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=DragonsChest Feb 8, 2013  Professional Writer
I love the refrain which gives this poem its character...
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