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:new: Hear me read it here / Vous pouvez m'entendre le lire ici : [link]

For you, I'd wait 'til kingdom come,
Until my days, my days are done.
Say you'll come and set me free,
Say you'll wait, you'll wait for me

- Coldplay, Til Kingdom Comes
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Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Etonnant que je n'aie pas celui-ci dans mes faves... regrettable oubli désormais réparé.
"Despair eating my soul
While I wait for a kingdom that will never come" : c'est beau...
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Delice1941 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Sadness pervades poem that is beautifully written:rose:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :rose:
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D'accord avec War, c'est l'équilibre fragile entre la sensualité du début et le vertige de la fin qui font la force de ce très beau texte.
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
merci beaucoup. ce fût intéressant de le revisiter un an plus tard ...
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:rose:
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SylveryFox Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:wow:
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
je vais le prendre comme un compliment :lol:
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SylveryFox Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Pfiou, il déchire celui-là! :clap:
Sans conteste un de mes préférés ...
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: merki
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SylveryFox Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:icongeddyleeplz:
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
La lecture ça va?
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:iconsylveryfox:
SylveryFox Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
y'a une petite pointe d'accent, mais dans l'ensemble ça va :D
:lol:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
C'toi l'accent
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BigBlueSkyFotos Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I read these words, deliberately and thoughtfully, images and feelings swirling in a river of ideas and impressions, gushing through my mind's eye, overpowering and blurring. stopped me, cold... yet as I listened to you read those same words, whether in English or French, clarity and calm prevailed, strong images and feelings focused... complete surrender to emotion and understanding... joy!
Thank you for sharing your work in sound... I hope that you will continue to do this. I am overwhelmed... :heart: :rose:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
what a beautiful compliment ! thank you :rose:
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BigBlueSkyFotos Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you inspire! :hug: :)
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You have a beautiful voice, written and spoken.
A lovely write. :heart:
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much :heart:
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:iconlombregrise:
lombregrise Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Professional Writer
bon flow! :)
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:iconwordeea:
Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ouais - mais ton poll me fait dire que j'articule pas assez ;p sérieusement, j'ai tendance à mâcher mes mots - je le fais trop dans mes audios ?
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Professional Writer
non c'est parfait - je demande juste pour moi :lol:

non, on sent même que tu fais attention de ne pas le faire ;)

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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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astrangeallure Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really beautiful, sad...so visual and I feel it deeply...love these: Come find me....Stolen...Cold harsh rain on my warm slumber...the jolt...yes. For me, reading poetry has a double impact...I read it, feel it, of course, but also I see it as you have written it and I see it as if I am creating a piece of art with images that match the words and emotions...very odd, right?...:D Excellent...:clap: :heart:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)

i think that most people relate to poetry that way. i do that. it touches me, then i try to see it from the writer's perspective
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astrangeallure Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Most welcome. :heart:
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remy5010 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
On sent bien l'émotion. Personnellement, je raturerais les 4 derniers vers. Im da clichéminator.
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ah oui. je vois. mais non. ce poème est important et la chute absolument nécessaire et doit être dites dans ces mots-là. reine du kitch, te dis ;)
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beaucoup d'émotion dans celui-ci :happycry: :rose:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oui, en effet :rose: merci !
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Delice1941 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Heartfelt poem that ends on a sad note. It captured my thoughts.
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Wordeea Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! so glad you liked it :)
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HeleneM7 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
J'aime beaucoup tes textes. Ya des émotions qui passent dans tes mots
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Wordeea Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
merci du compliments ! c'est ce que j'essaie de faire
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Rayon2lune Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
J'aime beaucoup
:rose:
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Wordeea Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
merci beaucoup! pour le favori aussi :)
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Rayon2lune Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
De rien c'est avec plaisir
:rose:
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Ninefiftin Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
·star studded tree : le genre d'image dont je suis absolument fan :love:
·Despair eating my soul
While I wait for a kingdom that will never come

For me
: comment ne pas se sentir bouleversé(e) quand ce genre d'horrible sensation est dit avec une telle simplicité...
· J'ai l'impression qu'il y a tellement dans ce stolen... un point de convergence et à la fois un carrefour (d'où l'italique pour sa mise en valeur j'imagine)... j'adore.

En fait je craque pour la simplicité et l'élégance de ton écriture ^^
Et très belle traduction, elles sont de plus en plus belles d'ailleurs :)
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drolebouillon Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ben l'écriture automatique c'est "fun" mais lorsque les textes sont si bien travaillés le plaisir du lecteur est à la hauteur des efforts déployés !

Notes que c'est un compliment ! Alambiqué mais un vrai compliment.
Très beau texte !
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